International Literary Books Are Here


Reading and writing has always been a part of my life.  This blog has particularly been an enriching journey.  While my Dead/Live journals were a great place for me in school to express my feelings about my student life, this blog, M&M Mariam Books, has been a place where I can share my thoughts while at the same time produce content my adult self can be proud of.  This blog is still in its youth, but it’s quickly growing.  I’ve seen great success with this blog, more than I could have expected. I think there is no time better than now to introduce the next great thing I will be doing with this blog.


The world of English literature will not be exhausted by me anytime soon, but in my quest to read the best of all literature I don’t want to limit myself.  I would like to add new types of written works into my reading repertoire.  I will be focusing on Spanish and Arabic literature, along with English/American Literature.


Those who have been reading this blog for some time now know I have an Asian background.  I have a profound love for classical Arabic literature.  The Arab civilization is large, with a long history, and a rich language.  I think the best works are from antiquity (aka The Golden Age) 750AD-1250AD, however many modern Arab or MENA writers like Tariq Ramadan, Umm Zakiyyah, Maryam Mahmoodian have added diversity to the genre.


In addition to Arabic, lots of my neighbors are from various Latin countries, like Cuba, Mexico, Puerto Rico, and Dominican Republic.  I’ve had Spanish friends and also attended school with Columbians, Ecuadorians, and Brazilians.  One of my favorite writing inspirations is Andrea Balt, a young lady from Spain who runs the WriteYourselfAlive write-a-thon.  Spanish writing hails way back from 14th century Andalusia to the Latin American countries: from  Miguel Cervantes’ Don Quiote to One Hundred Years of Solitude by Gabriel Garcia Marquez.



I have a great love for English books as I dedicated 4 years of college to study it, so those videos on my YouTube channel and posts on this blog will not go away and I will continue commentating on English books. However you will be seeing more posts and videos on Spanish and Arabic literature.    I hope that you are as excited as I am for this addition to my blog.  I am not limiting my blog to English, Spanish, and Arabic literature, however I would like to do justice to each of these first before moving onto others.   All cultures have something positive to contribute to our own and I’m honored to be bringing those cultures to my blog.

Star Trek: Horizon Fan Film Review – Spoiler-Free | M&M Mariam

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This will be a spoiler-free review.   

With a new Star Trek television show, Star Trek (2017), airing January 2017, new feature film Star Trek: Beyond and several Star Trek film projects including Renegades, Continued, Voyages, Of Gods and Men.  Campaigns like #WeWantWorf, #BringJadziaBack, and a new film Star Trek: Captain Pike, the Star Trek world is on the brink of some great stories for fans and new audiences.


I became a fan of the Star Trek Universe (not so much the franchise, as I’ll explain later) after reading two Star Trek books in my early twenties.  While in high school I saw Captain Picard, Riker, Geordi, Data, Worf, and Deanna numerous times on commercials clips while watching Sliders on the Sci-Fi network. I even tuned into TNG for a few minutes once in a while.  I really enjoyed the two seasons of Nickelodeon’s short-lived kids show, Space Cases, starring Walter Emmanuel and Jewel Staite. To me, as a late 90s kid, the eighties aesthetic of Star Trek looked more like the 60s, so unfortunately it didn’t become appealing to me until I became an adult and watched it for the content and characters.  I watched Star Trek: The Next Generation and Star Trek: Deep Space Nine on Netflix and fell in love with the television version of Star Trek; which is really the heartbeat of the Star Trek universe, in my opinion and is also the largest fan base.

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Even after I watched Star Wars, which my cousin really likes, Star Trek was always more appealing to me as it dealt with philosophy, relationships, humanity, human weakness and strength, diversity, and exploration, competition, and much more than just space battles alone.  That fact that it was a futuristic show with space ships, and alien empires was icing on the cake. This was my first favorite nonfiction picture book:

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Space, in my humble opinion, is vast and fascinating



Although ST: Voyager has a great diverse cast, and ST:Enterprise has good CGI, ST: Deep Space Nine and ST:The Next Generation is by far the superior of all Star Trek television.  As far as the films go, I haven’t seen them all, but out of what I have seen, I really liked First Contact, while The Search for Spock lagged behind it a little, and Insurrection was not too appealing overall, however I liked seeing TNG crew back on screen together again. The JJ Abrams, Star Trek (2009), Star Trek: Into the Darkness, and Star Trek: Beyond (coming out July 22, 2016 in theatres), are a sore disappointment.  They are not bad movies, they are simply not Star Trek, in my opinion.  Of course, I haven’t seen Star Trek: Beyond yet; for the CGI of space ships and outer space it will likely be worth watching.  Yet, many fans have decried failure to live up to the best of what makes Star Trek, Star Trek.

Post-TNG/DS9, fans have also been ambivalent about anything new from the Star Trek universe.  The last series ST:Enterprise ran only 4 seasons. It’s sad that Enterprise was short-lived because there’s nothing like Star Trek in any other television series or fictional world.  The failure of producers to live up to the quality of Star Trek and the depth of its content, has slowly been met by fans over the past few years.  And this is something new for me.  Unfortunately, I’d always imagined superfans of Star Trek to be “fangirls” and “fanboys” who squee at new movies, and blindly praise most Star Trek products, and dress up as Captain Kirk and betazoids at conventions devotedly.  After I saw Horizon, I was proven wrong.  The Star Trek fans are not just admiring viewers, they are also very talented people.  Slowly but surely, lots of what’s going on in the fandom, especially on YouTube and blogs, is worth looking into.  They have much more quality and are faithful to the Star Trek universe than what Paramount has produced in the films or anything post TNG/DS9/Voyager.


I will meet you at the edge of the universe.  One can hope.

Star Trek: Horizon is definitely worth a look. It was released February 28, 2016 on Youtube.  I’m not associated with any of the filmmakers, I ran across this movie while looking for Star Trek (2009) reviews, but what I saw, was impressive.  Not without its flaws, but quite nice.  I haven’t seen any other fan films, so this is the first time I’ve experienced one.

The movie follows the story of Captain Harrison Hawke, who has a surgically altered Romulan female- a starfleet officer on his ship, named T’mar. Because of her surgeries she looks completely human.  This movie is set in the pre-Federation era, where the Coalition of Planets is at war with The Romulan empire.  Captain Hawke must set out on a mission to defend the Coalition against a destructive weapon the Romulans are said to be making.

The movie opens with a scene 250,000 years in the past where two Ionians are using a device made by their enemy, the Arioui.  This device is called the Horizon.  They kill themselves to protect their people.  They end up destroying their entire population.  The opening scene instantly hooked me for three reasons:

  1. the imminent destruction of an entire population peaked the danger and consequence of the situation I was watching unfold
  2. the romance between the husband and wife fighting for their lives, and the lives of their people forcing them to make a difficult decision made me emotionally attached to these characters and want them to succeed
  3. the visual effects of Horizon encapsulating their planet was spectacular

We then fast forward to March 31, 2160. Hawke’s starship, Discovery is being chased and bombarded by a Romulan vessel. An important member of his crew dies, while the majority survive.  Admiral Gardener calls Hawke in to discuss T’mar, potentially a Romulan spy, and his next mission. On this mission, the Romulans attack; their weapon is not ready and fails. The Discovery arrives on a beautiful, yet abandoned planet.  The camera zooms in on a tall monument with a large golden ring spinning at the top, and spans down to the surface where it stands amidst a mountain of gorgeous purple flowers/flowering trees.  Hawke’s crew gets trapped in the future with no way out.  That’s basically the jist of the plot. Now onto my commentary.

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It’s clear to any Star Trek viewer that the starship bridge is filmed on a closed set.  Unlike in TNG/DS9/Voyager/Enterprise the producers decided to blur out the background, and focused on the speakers while on the ship.  This bothered me a little as I’m not used to this, but as a viewer it gave me the opportunity to focus on what each crew member was saying while they unlocked the secrets to return to their time.  I felt like I was on the ship with the crew, helping them solve their problems. The blurring ended up being very positive for me. However for the future, if the moviemakers had an impeccable set to film their bridge scenes, updated to 2016, this would certainly improve the visual appeal of the film.

The uniforms are all blue, similar to ST: Enterprise era.  I’m a fan of the TNG/DS9/Voyager uniforms, but the blue were appropriate because this film takes place pre-Federation.

The CGI is as good as what I expect from a 2016 film, better perhaps.  There was only one incident where I saw a mistake, that was in the last 20 minutes of the film, as they were trying to escape the Horizon, there was a computer-generated explosion-cloud in the right bottom corner of the screen and the stone didn’t tear apart.

I have no complaints about the actors, they were very good.  They were not endearing like Deanna Troi, Worf, Jadzia Dax, or Jake Sisko and Nog but the story line made me feel compassionate about these people.

I noticed the movie got  a 6/10 on IMDB, but I think that’s for two reasons:

1. because there wasn’t any sex in the movie. Everybody loves sex and sex sells, but I think onscreen sex is not usually satisfying, but self-gratifying, and sometimes just nasty. It is more important for me to see romantic affection between two characters because love is the most powerful human emotion. The filmmakers successfully managed to convey romance without having the actors take off all their clothes, or share a scene with green-colored naked aliens. That brought more focus on the story, relationship challenges between the characters during and after the battle, which is part of the reason Star Trek has always been so successful, and I think this movie, as well.

2. there wasn’t any humor

The way I see it, when dealing with difficult issues like the death of many people, an endless battle, racial tensions, losing a child, or break-ups in long-term romantic relationships, it’s important to have a little appropriate humor to lighten the mood.  I think Nog, Quark, Odo, Worf made great comic relief in DS9, while Data, and even Captain Picard, once in a while, made us laugh on TNG.



I give the movie a 9/10.

This movie has had over 1 million views on YouTube, so you shouldn’t be surprised at my rating. Keep in mind, my review is from someone who’s never seen a fan film. I had nothing but original films and TV shows to compare it to.  I got lucky with clicking on Horizon. Based on the Star Trek material that’s been out since 2007, Horizon as a movie exceeded my expectations. It had an exciting plot. Also, it balanced beauty, science, and humanity.  It was not perfect, but very near to it. It’s so unfortunate that CBS is not allowing them a sequel: Federation Rising.  I think with movies like Horizon being produced, CBS has a lot to live up to satisfy the fans. There are dozens, even hundreds of amazing stories to be told in the Star Trek universe.   The fan film verse is undeniably growing; with the right talent it will flourish beautifully.  In turn, it will bring a bigger audience to the future Star Trek television shows.


*AUTHOR’S NOTE: Before making this review I learned that CBS was suing the creators of Axanar, another fan film.  While writing it this morning, I learned that CBS dropped the lawsuit, paving the way for the continuation of Star Trek: Horizon and other fan films.  With this news, I certainly hope Tommy Kraft will seriously consider completing the Federation Rising project.  I will talk more on my thoughts about this on my YouTube channel here.

Safe Spaces – for Bookish People


Oh have I missed writing for this blog! It’s been too long.  Why I haven’t been posting anything new here for a month is because I’ve been busy with family and following this run-amok Election 2016.  But I’m back today, and writing about a topic near and dear to me, and that is safe spaces.

Three years ago a friend spoke to me about people from a local community center creating a Third Space.  They felt they were being outcasted for having different opinions, and felt unsafe opening up to the women in that community center.  But because they had no money they could not create a hall or establish a building or rent a room where they could meet regularly to talk about things important to them.  Maybe it was a divorce they were going though, a spiritual crisis, or a sexual transformation, or a taboo career change.


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In my career I’ve come across kids, my own students or kids at my school, going through a family or personal struggle and could not talk to anyone about it — including me, because it was a conservative school, where you just didn’t talk about those things.  They were silenced, afraid, and emotionally unstable.  They lashed out in class, were rebellious or disobedient, or extremely shy and reserved because they could open up to on one.  Not their parents, not their friends, not their teachers.  There was no safe space for them to speak – not at home, not at school, nowhere in the community.  I think keeping emotions bottled up inside is not healthy.  Because I had no where to go as a teenager, I found a nice place for myself.  For me, my safe space was books.  Some of my favorites became Clifford the Big Red Dog, Magic School Bus, and Berenstain bears. My favorite teen books became The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chobsky and The Chosen by Chiam Potok, but my favorite was and is the Harry Potter series.

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These are books where I could find relatable characters, magic, jokes and humor, and mentors like Professor Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall.  I could enwrap myself in a world where almost anything was possible.  And although there were evil people like the Death Eaters, the good guys had magic and their wands to save them from the forces of darkness.  They would control earth, fire, wind, and water.  They were in control of their environment, and when I read those books, I was right there with them, fighting through it all with my Cedar, unicorn hair, 10 inch wand in hand.


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my wand on

The Harry Potter books are indeed a safe space for me.  It bothers me that some Native Americans feel hurt in the way J. K. Rowling depicted their cultures in her recent writing “Magic in North America” on Pottermore.  More so, that Harry Potter has no longer become a safe space for them.  Maybe because I am not Native American I don’t feel hurt, but Rowling has also not painted South Asians in a brilliant light, either. I hope that Harry Potter continues to be a safe space, and if it isn’t feel free to express your opinions because if it matters to you, it matters.

We need safe spaces.  Without a place to talk out our feelings and thoughts with open-minded people, we will become shells of ourselves.  And we can’t afford that.  We live in an increasingly complex world at the intersection of races, places, and faces.  We need strong, informed people to create the future for us and our kids.  So, if you have a safe space, thank your club president and go out there and create safe spaces for everyone like for me, many authors, especially J. K. Rowling has.

Building Story Worlds #2: Assets in Cities:Skylines Workshop

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Last September I started a series on this blog called “Building Story Worlds.” My initial intention was to write a number of posts on how to create cities for story-writing purposes. The idea started when I saw the great work Sim City fans were doing on Simtropolis’s City journals. Some of them are truly high quality and updated regularly, such as every week or every few days. Many city-builders have created elaborated stories of revolutions, political upheavals, overthrowing of kings to be replaced with republics, romantic love stories, and changes in cities like added canals, country border alterations, subway systems complete with maps, magical beings tampering with the human world, and cities from the future. Some city-builders are quite creative story writers as they’ve built entire stories around their artwork.

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Wheel of Time Map

I’ve always liked maps, architecture, and pictures of cityscapes and played Sim City off and on throughout my teens and 20s. But my first love was story writing. So last year, shortly after the release of the new Cities: Skylines (you can find my game review here), I decided to build cities for my story worlds and share my creative process with you, if that’s right up your alley (along the lines of my Art of Creativity Series which you can find here). This series will be focused on how Cities: Skylines encourages my creativity as a story writer.

Assets in the Cities:Skylines Workshop

Stories need sharp, clear images to be enjoyed. If you’re reading a book, the author must be able to create that image in her reader’s head.  For video game designers, it’s all in the digital graphics.  Graphics in video games like Skyrim and Final Fantasy have improved their graphics greatly over the past decade, and the newer Dragon Age has had to live up to a new standard of color and graphic detail, since its inception in 2009. Since the advent of Sim City 4, in 2003, so have city-building games. In Cities:Skylines, you’re able to have more control on the shape of roads, the mountains and rivers in the landscape, and zoom onto the Cim people on your streets. I still think Cities:Skylines (CSL) doesn’t quite capture the appeal and beauty of its predecessor, Sim City 4, or even some buildings in Sim City 2013, but the functions of the new game make it more playable, and build-able for creative people like me. However, the assets being built by designers, including a former Maxis-employee, known online as Gula, has up-scaled the ability to build large, sprawling, powerful and pleasing cities for all players.

Today, I thought I’d share with you some of my favorite assets up to this point:

Joseph Chamberlain Clock Tower by BlockHeadGames

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Space shuttle by Aeon / & Ares V Rocket by dadofu

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Regal Theater by MrMaison

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Mad Tech and Fox Industries by Populous

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Stadium by Drosovilas

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The Achilles Tower by Visu

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Kingdom Tower by Gula

gula's kingdom tower

I also get ideas for my cities from YouTubers like TOVlogs and ASilksWorld.

There are lots of others I like and use, as I have close 750 assets and 6 mods, however, these are the ones that stuck out for me as I was making my choices.

My only frustrations with user-made assets are 4 things:

  1. No Name to the item


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No Item name on Steam Workshop or User interface.

  1. No picture in the User Interface

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    No picture and no item name on User interface.

Sometimes I download parks or Unique Buildings, but more often it’s parks, that don’t show up on my User Interface.  With 7,000+ assets and hundreds of parks, it’s often too difficult for me to find the park I need when I’m neighborhood planning, which makes me want to quit for the day to the point where I don’t want to come back to the game for a long while. I feel like city building in a professional game should be quite seamless — which I think Cities:Skylines does really well when it comes to the road flexibility — but a simple thing like no picture in the user interface, even if it appears on the Steam Workshop — it’s near impossible to build a city without a picture to the asset, doubled by the fact that the Vanilla game doesn’t list the name of the item in the User Interface.  All you get is a picture, unless the asset developer doesn’t upload a picture — which means, no picture, no item name.

  1. Poor quality 3D Art
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    Blurry Hot Dog Herald Delivery Truck

  2. Countless Ugly Billboards
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Countless ugly billboards on Vanilla buildings.

As a user, I get very frustrated when an asset has ruptures, is poorly thought-out, or just sloppily assembled. I’m not a visual artist, so I cannot imagine the effort needed to put together near-perfect 3D art for a video or PC game, but I can tell you what bothers me as a player. The game is still new and I’m sure it will go through its fairshar of setbacks, but I don’t see lots of quality work on the Steam Workshop, for things I need in my cities, like space ports, medieval style buildings, a variety of houses of worship, stylish hospitals, police stations, and schools. My asset needs as a city-builder, much like others on Simtropolis, run the gamut of history and time. I see lots of poorly sketched assets and few really great designers. I think there’s more graphic design talent out there but I don’t see enough good content, yet, for me to consistently play and build, say a few hours a week and build elaborate and exciting cities for my characters to live, work, and play in. The incessant billboards on my beautiful Vanilla-game buildings are also still quite repulsive. Where are all the decent 3D designers hiding and why aren’t they building for Cities:Skylines?

I still think Cities:Skylines is a great game, as I am still playing it.  Like Sim City 4, I think if users keep creating good stuff and game developers at Colossal Order keep delivering on their promises, this game will have a long run, quite possibly as long as Sim City 4 (12+ years), or more.

As far as this series of blog posts go, I’m not currently writing a novel, but as a writer, the ideas don’t stop flowing, so I’ve decided to dedicate my creative energies to my world building, with CSL as a tool. If you’re interested in more game-specific content, I’ve started a blog dedicated solely to technical Cities:Skylines material and can be found on Steam as Fearless Mayor.

Thanks for reading and have a great Thursday =)

EDIT: An earlier version of this post said I had 7,500 assets, in fact, I have 750 assets currently I’m subscribed to on Steam Workshop.  

Wheel of Time Commentaries #2 | M&M Mariam

The journey continues, albeit a little late, the Wheel of Time Commentaries by The Woman.

These are commentaries on Rand’s story, the Dragon Reborn, by the woman who knew him best.


Robert Jordan started writing the history of my dear Rand el’Thor, The Dragon, in 1990 AD. Brandon Sanderson finished the 14-volume work after Jordan’s sadly early demise. I found their work comprehensive and thoughtful, however, I noticed after I read all the volumes, it is missing some crucial details known to me alone, told to me by Rand in his waning years. For the fair telling of his heroic tale, I decided to provide my commentary from whence Rand re-told me his journey as the Dragon before his death. Many thanks to Elesmere Publishers for putting these into print. Please support these great historians.

The Woman

January, 2016 | Ghealdan

Chapters 7-11

Always the protective fellow, Rand, at first, was reluctant to take Egwene along. He cared for her quite a bit. He thought she was beautiful, and kind, and like him, she had a love for adventure. She wanted to be trained at Tar Valon in the powers of the Wisdom, and she was willing to hike up her skirts, ride a horse through a seemingly endless night, the threat of Trollocs upon them, to get there and learn the magical arts of the Wisdom.  But there was little Rand could do to dissuade her, for he knew in the pit of his soul, the call of adventure, the tingle of mysterious new lands, was singing in his flesh. He was afraid for his friends, Mat, Perrin, and the accompanying Gleeman, Thom, and he was unsure whether to trust Moiraine, the Aes Sedai, but he was distressed by his father’s illness, and if it wanted to stay alive – Moiraine and her bonded ward, Lan, were his only hope for safety.  So through the night they rode, and bribed the Ferry Master with a sack of gold to tread them and their sturdy, shining horses across the Terry river – still under the threat of the ill-omened raven. He was at a complete loss to know what lay ahead, but he tread onward. Egwere and his two friends were with him; whatever shadows they encountered, they would face them together.




The 4 Other Wizarding Schools, My Guesses

It’s been quite a while since I’ve posted, and truthfully, I’ve quite missed blogging!

I’ve lately been into the content J. K. Rowling’s been releasing on Pottermore, her digital home for the Wizarding World of Harry Potter. I’ve been fascinated about the new wizarding schools she revealed. There are 11 major wizarding schools around the world including the three we’re introduced to in the Harry Potter Books (in Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire – Year 4):

  1. Beaxbatons, France
  2. Durmstrang, Scandanavian countries
  3. and of course, Hogwarts in Scotland.

The additional schools she’s revealed by name on her digital home are:

  1. Uagadou, Uganda, Africa
  2. Mahoutokoro, Japan
  3. Castelbruxo, Brazil
  4. Ilvermorny, Northeast America

She has not yet told us the location of the North American school, but my guess would be a place as majestic and mysterious and Niagara Falls, directly at the border of Canada and the United States.

I thought it would be fun to share with you my guesses for where the other 5 schools are located.

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Mount Everest, Himalaya Mountains, Nepal


  1. Near Kathmandu, Nepal

Home of the tallest peak on earth, Mt. Everest (Himalayan Mountain Range), and filled with great ancient Eastern history of the Hindus, Buddhists, Sikhs, Muslims, Eastern peoples and bordering China and India.


St. Basil’s Cathedral, Moscow, Russia

  1. Moscow, Russia

This city has great European and Asian history, established sometime before 1147 AD.
It has lovely architecture, a beautiful cityscape, a monorail system and the Moskva River.


Aurora Australis, Tasmania, Australia

  1. Devonport, Tasmania, Australia

An island off the coast of Australia, Tasmania is the perfect place for a magic school because it is off the mainland, but just a day-long boat ride, or 1 hour flight from Melbourne, and less than double that for Sydney.

      4. Ronda, Spain

A small beautiful town in the Iberian peninsula originally settled by the Celts and named at the time of Julius Caesar. There are few countries as beautiful as Spain. I think the Spanish influence creates a mystic and exotic feel to the European city. It would be brilliant to see the types of culturally refined witches and wizards this school could produce.

If there are more than 11 famous wizarding schools, I’d place them:

Near Wenatchee, Washington

This is near the Cascade Mountains, which is a beautiful place to behold, and the Columbia River.   It’s also very magical, look at the names of the mountain peaks. Surrounded by forest and within the valleys of mountains for privacy.

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Cascade Mountains, Washington State

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Malaysian Oceanside

Sungai Petani, Malaysia

Just a few hours from Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia by car. South of Thailand and Cambodia, north of Indonesia, a set of islands in an archipelago. Filled with mysterious karst limestone caves, lakes, rivers and grottos is a sight to see! The bright and welcoming witches and wizards of Malaysia would be a delight to visit.


The Komodo Dragon in its home, Indonesia

Banda Aceh, Indonesia

The location for the horrible 2004 tsunami (probably caused by an evil dark wizard and his croonies) disturbing the magical Indonesian community. The mystical place of Buddhism, Voodoo, and surrounded by ocean water and islands. Also, home of the Komodo Dragon.

This week I will be anxiously awaiting even more information J. K. Rowling’s writing up: the History of North America. As far as the location of Ilvermorny goes, we’ll have to wait until we know more to find out if I’m right. I enjoyed putting this short list together, as I discovered new places and people and geographies. It was quite fun! What are your guesses for the locations of the wizarding schools? I’d love to know! Take care all and hope you enjoyed this post.

Wheel of Time Commentaries – #1 | M&M Mariam

These are commentaries on Rand’s story, the Dragon Reborn, by the woman who knew him best.

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Robert Jordan started writing the history of my dear Rand el’Thor, The Dragon, in 1990 AD. Brandon Sanderson finished the 14-volume work after Jordan’s sadly early demise. I found their work comprehensive and thoughtful, however, I noticed after I read all the volumes, it is missing some crucial details known to me alone, told to me by Rand in his waning years. For the fair telling of his heroic tale, I decided to provide my commentary from whence Rand re-told me his journey as the Dragon before his death. Many thanks to Elesmere Publishers for putting these into print. Please support these great historians.

The Woman

January, 2016



Commentaries on Chapters 1-6

Rand was always a curious, pensive man. He admired skill and had a heart for adventure. However, his curiosity often led him to dangers which shook his foundations and long held beliefs. When he heard his father mutter strange things about his history as a child found during the war, and ran through the forest to bring him safely to the Winespring, his very sense of self was questioned. When Moiraine told him and his two friends the Trollocs and Fade were after him, he mused perhaps there was something unusual about him. Perhaps he wasn’t just the son of a farmer. A farmer, who happened to have a sword meant to kill creatures of the night. A sword he never knew his father had. He also did not wish to leave the only home he’d ever known, but if it meant his father’s safety — he could not think how Tam, his father, would react knowing he was under siege by the trolls that burnt his farm and his two friends’. But against the wind he trod, perhaps he could make a better future for them both. His heart full of hope.